Hits a string :(
I like it even tho I prefer techno on newgrounds. I had a friend just die and I went to his wake in North NJ. :( Keep it up buddy!
Reviews for "Loss of a Loved One (R.I.P.)"
jerseyendless responds:
yea I kno exactly what your talkin about. ive had 3 friends die in the last 2 years and i know what your feelin. we know that their at peace so thats good, and sorry for your loss...hope this song makes it better
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pears? why did he say my pears
jerseyendless responds:
its peers, and it means classmates/friends/people our age.
I hate to be the asshole here...
It's awesome to see you using rap to let feelings out in a real way. The song itself is admirable on all levels. That being said, the biggest problem of the song was the flow. Everything felt evenly spaced and said at the same emphasis. And for a song so personal, I don't feel the emotion in it really. I'm sure you had a lot when writing it though. You just need to work on your delivery big time, and the lyrics a little bit.
Just trying to be honest.
jerseyendless responds:
its all good