Reviews for Mario Brothers - Part III

[Player-hater]

So you're turning the plot around

As you know, I am definitely one of your biggest fans and claim that this series is the best thing that happened to NG since Blue Clock. But from what I can tell, you're aiming to change this from a tragedy to a happy ending. In the first series you say, "This is the tragic story of what happends to the Mario Brothers", so what once was a tragedy, you are going to make it into a happy ending.

I had alot of unresolved thoughts when watching this- Is Luigi still alive? Are you planning to make another epic castle scene with a bunch of toadstools attacking the castle? Why would you waste minutes of our time making a life mushroom that does no work?

Through you chose Radiohead's Pyramid Song (you and I both love Radiohead) and parts of the Lord of the Rings soundtrack, you didn't really create as intense music or any intense scenes like that could be seen in Mario Brothers 1 and 2. I feel like I could give suggestions to how you can make great scenes, if only you would answer your email. Why don't you respond? Is your email broke?

Anyways, not as good as the other 2 but I got a feeling this is all just exposition for the finale.

Please make the last one as good as the FIRST one. Although your Mario Brother Part II got better score because NG users are such whores to action, your first one had probably the best music visual choreography and sometimes the most powerful scenes don't involve legions of things geting killed a frame. Also, for the last one, consider building up the suspense by showing what Bowswer is doing to the Princess (perhaps as the brothers are running it cuts to a scene showing Bowswer tie her up to torture her).

Anyways, please take these things into consideration

Phantasmagoria-crow responds:

Hallo. This is a tragedy, I am aware that I said this from the beginning. I have no plans to change it. I have the whole story planned out in my head. The basic purpose of this episode is to bring in a new character and finalize luigi's resting place as well as state that it's all pointless... I show you the attempts to save his life but it doesn't work, they wasted one of the most valubale items they had. There will only be glimpse's of hope throughout, like the Life mushroom, but in the end its hopeless. The end shows a glimmer of hope, but i will not go against what i said. This is and will be tragedy.

With my email its just the email that AIM uses so I guess it sucks. But i will try to respond thru reviews if you really seem urgent. I thought up the finali before i even started the first part, so I hope it'll turn out as powerful as I see it in my mind. But then again this is just a little Sprite flash series that I'm doing for fun, it's all basically an experiemnt to see if I can tell a story well.

[outlaw-star]

nooooooooooooo

come now. make the other movie!!!!!!!!

p.s. pretty good

[K-Man714]

Wow

I like action, but i like plot to. This is probably the most serious mario movie out there. Keep up the good work, cant wait to see more, and the battle scene between Bowser and Mario.

[J-Dawg87]

very good

I never thought I could see mario portrayed in a serious way like this. excellent movie

[ayd0n]

quality

i like wot ur doin wit this, its got a good stroy line to it so keep it up