You are a great flash artist
Personally, i like this better than rotmk. So anyways, i think this 'chapter' is better than the others, mainly because of the story. the secnd wasn't so great because of the climax, but what is done is done. The first one was good mainly because of the classic Mario action. I was so impressed on how smooth and exciting it was. The only problem is you ALWAYS leave us hanging, however, i guess that is how you get good scores.