Nice for a first
Nice movie. Cool drawings and a good story. The animation was ok, but could occasionally look bad though.
I this really is your first flash...I am deeply impressed. People's first flashes usually are stick skater movies.
Reviews for "Pet Pub [original]"
Not bad at all.
You gotta work on your drawing a bit, and leave a little more time between the flash-back thingys, but thats pretty funny.
Keep it up!
It was good for a first one.
Pretty good for a first time but some suggestions.
#1:get better mic
#2:work on your artistic abilities
other then that it was good!
keep it up!
Not bad
Keep working, you can make good movies I'm sure, your drawings are good, work a little bit on the sound tough, other than that it'S a good start.
It doesn't matter if it's ur first flash.
Flash is flash. U have to work on ur drawing a bit more. Wasn't really funny. Anyways 4 ur first flash its kinda shitty. No offense. Work on ur drawing more and when the guys talk there lips keep moving even when the sound stops. So good try.