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some constructive criticism here...
first, get some music or something in the backround, and do the voices better, and why did the guy sound like he was 3 years old?
second, improve on the animation
third, the humor was terrible, it was just some guy pulling off anothers pants.
Hope this helped in some way. Kinda sux that you have turd of the week on your record now...just improve on episode 3
The poo
Well pretty basic with the facial animation but well put out! This flash gives veiwers the slightest questionable looking original gags! The gags that the charactors can pull without noticing. bah, simple humor is always funny';)
Interesting
While I admit that the animation was a little bit lacking, I really respect what you're trying to say with this piece. Pro-homosexual art will never be popular, and I encourage you to continue to fight for your sexuality even though others may persecute you for it. I really caught onto the homoerotic undertones in this movie, and the way that the one man undressed his partner in such a playful way was fantastic. You really captured the fun and playfulness of homosexual intercourse with your art!
I've seen worse
Your movie wasn't that bad, it was just a little rough looking. Keep trying, the more you practice the better you will get.
can any one say...
crap?