Not bad kid.
Not a bad job. Consider having someone else do your voices, I agree. Your animation was very nice.
Work on some more complicated storylines, and keep working on your drawing.
Not bad kid.
Not a bad job. Consider having someone else do your voices, I agree. Your animation was very nice.
Work on some more complicated storylines, and keep working on your drawing.
2 days isnt a lot.
It you dont spend more time then that on your flashes its not that strange that they are not that good.It coud be a lot better if you worked on everythin you made for over a week,the movie Genryus Blade took 5 months to make!If you spend that much time on your movies,you will probably get good!
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Good
It was not bad
((( NEEDS WORK )))
Well notbad, but i would have to say either work on your own voice or somthing, the story also needs some depth and detail to it, but notbad for this one...
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makes no sense...
i don't know what the hell happened there... wierd plot...