hmmm...
Well, its your first flash, ok I really liked the way "old guy" was running.
But sorry, I didn't get the story..
The design is really bad!!
Try Illustrator next time, and not drawing with your mouse on Flash, its not artistic, you just wanted to get this thing over quickly.
whats ilustrator? email me machstealth@hotmail.com or aim=bananaz4food27. thx for the 1!
pretty good for a first flash
well im here reviewing your flash....pretty decent...exspecialy fora first...like that other guy said you derserve more .... i know you dont deserve a 5 but your getting one so your Rating will go up....ao good work
-=oO MIKE Oo
thanks I appreciate it. but how wuld a 5 make my rating go up? followed by all those zeroes
you deserve a higher score than what some....
of these people are giving you. For your first flash this is pretty good. I can see you have some talent and you will continue to get better. Good job.
thanks, i really and truly appreciate it. its cool to have someone believe in me. plus most of these viewers dont have their own flash but jsut like critisizing others. peace!
I don't know about animation, but....
The music choice was really good. It's overly dramatic and really strange in comparison with the entirely stupid setting of an old man chasing a turtle. The graphics are kind of sucky but I know how much of a pain in the ass it is to draw in Flash....
thanks i know, but whatever it's not my favorite flash too. my friends were bugging the hell out of me to finish it so yeah whatever. check out "bored pharoah" when i sumbit it soon, itll be much better than this. I actually take my time with my 2nd flash.
This was a practice piece...
as such it should be offline, to worked on, to be forged to perfection. To try and try over and over. Don't take my scoring the wrong way, I just wish that when people submit a first flash, I wish it could be a first flash they felt was good enough, a flash that is actually very good and works out all the bugs of earlier trial versions. This is friendly advice, practice, but don't do it on NG, practice makes perfect, once you have something truly good, then by all means submit it, I look forward to it. If you think I'm being unkind, there will be many other users unwilling to even say words of encouragement. I look forwad to your first real flash, this is not it.
are you trying to use reverse pshychology on me? your sick