Reviews for JASF II

[DeathChug]

I still hate stick figures

I watch this one, and number one, like i said the animation is great, the art work needs work. I like the series though, and if you are going to continue using stick figures may I offer a few suggestions.

1) Make the teams diffrent colors. Once the action heats up its hard to tell who is who, especially in part one.

2)Use more weapons. I would like to see a lightsabe in the next one ;)

3) Try to at least create the background having a little more depth. In other words dont use real images, just dont make them look so plain.

4)Add a liitle (NOT TOO MUCH)Interactivity. something that maybe the watcher could do at the end.

5)Lastly I loved the homer simpson scream in the 3rd one. Add some more voice sounds, but make sure they are good and really fit in.

Thats all for my ramblings. I hope you follow some of the suggestions, as I feel they would make them flash films better for all.

[thepromaster]

Nice...

Cool movie. Nice stick fighting. It was a little less crazy then the 3rd one but this was a great stick fighting movie! NICE JOB. I'm so dissapointed of who lost though...

[Chronepsis]

~nods~ that was Good

That was very good. I enjoyed that. though there is a lot of stickmen Flashes out there, that was a good fight sceen. You have good timing for sound and moves "enjoyed that" and you got me at the end, most of the time it is the one with the weapon that wins. I was glade to see this time it was not, even though it was outnumbered. Good Job. Wish to see More. Good Luck.

Chronepsis Dragon, Elder
Star Dragons clan
Council of Dragons
Tal mar' sa'ng-fori
"Without Chains"

[Axis-d]

Pretty good

I thought it was good. Very smooth, kinda far away.

SPOILERS>>>>

I do like how the non-stick character won. It was kinda unpredictable, cuz naturally, you'd expect the guy WITH the stick, taking on several people to win. Thats what everyone does. You did something different, thats cool. I like the FF victory music too, :). To the reviewer before me, I think that popping noise was made whenever one of them would walk, it was just poorly done walking sound effects.

[S-c-r-a-t-c-h]

You did really well.

I liked it... Yeah, you did good with this one. Just a couple of suggestions, though.
1) Try and use more of the screen with zooming in.
2) Colors for teams helps alot too.
3) What was that continious popping noise in the background?? It didn't seem to have anything to do with the movie.

Other than that I thought it was well done. I do like a good stick fight...!!