Ever the cynical one, aren't you?
I think the humor of your dialogue targets the audience a little too well. I'd say you're a bastard, but whatever the case, I like it that way :)
As always, your graphics are superb. I know you don't need me telling you that, but nonetheless, as always, your artwork is top-notch. I could ramble on and on about it, but I'm not going to, because I'm sure you know that you can draw.
I liked the music as well! It fit in really nicely! It had a good RPG type feel to it, so great job there. Between that and the graphics you used, it really conveyed a nice atmosphere. I liked it a lot. Did you not include any voice because of the demo, or because you couldn't find anything suitable? I remember a lot of people, including me, suggesting different voices for the series itself, but nonetheless, I was kind of curious.
The dialogue, as I mentioned, was quite funny. Even the dating dialgoue was cause for amusement.
Speaking of dating, I can't help but thank you for making a system that is harder than just "buy the expensive stuff to wear the girl down" that we're used to. Those are too easy...it didn't take a TON of guesswork, but at least we had to work a little bit to get the hang of the flirting system and get it to work for us.
Keep it going: you're onto something. I know donations go a long way to make the world go around, but I think you tend to scare or piss off too many NG users, giving them less incentive to donate, which is kind of a disappointment because your hard work really shows in what you submit. I'd donate something to your cause if I had the means to do so. I understand you not wanting to deal with idiots - your thoughts are well-documented - but you gotta remember, you're on Newgrounds, man: this site mostly caters to them.