Hmm
Not bad. First let me respond to what 'TheLoneReviewer' had to say.
He criticizes the intro of the song, and calls it dull/ stayed within range/ too repetitive. - Hey, it's an intro. Many many intros have that sort of structure, it's called PROGRESSION. In fact, the whole song is kind of built upon that riff. The catagory of this music *IMO* is progressive groove metal. Ever hear of Redneck, by Lamb of God? Very similar structure. The word powerful in music, is purely opinionated. Some people think Metallica is powerful, where's I prefer Progressive Death Metal, like Meshuggah. Don't ever tell someone that the song 'isn't powerful'.
Anywho, I felt that the song was rather decent. The solo came in at the right time... but I'm not exactly sure if it fit in with the 'doom' feel of the song. It wasn't bad though. I can visualize Dad 'n Me when I listen to this song, especially with the sound-bytes. Kudos!