Happy easter
Hmm, well time to go back to reviewing songs from artists I knew a while back. Hope your CD is going well. This is what I thought.
Good:
1) Your 1st instrument reminds me of g-rave instruments. It's a okay instrument. Maybe cause I heard it so many times in his songs that it isn't shocking value here. Still it fit in the song which makes it good.
2) I like your atmospheric fx sounds. Heavenly happy I suppose.
3) 50 seconds in I like the percussion.
4) I notice the panning going on in that digital instrument. Neat idea.
Changes:
1) I have to be critical on this. That beginning melody is very unoriginal. Need to find something more original. Everyone knows that pattern (well I do)
2) 43 seconds in again that lead instrument is playing quite a common pattern. Oh well. It's happy :)
3) The song seems to repeat the same stuff for a while. It didn't really reach a climax...but then maybe you purposely didn't want that.
Overall, the song had some good stuff in it. I didn't experience anything new except for the fx. All said and done, you had a happy vibe going and you know I tend to like those kinds of songs. Work on the originality factor. I also notice a lot of your instruments are somewhat similar in all your songs. Now, I don't want to say anything because if that's your style than go ahead with these kind of instruments. However, I just wanted to point it out. Again, GL with your CD. Hope it goes well. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review.
Bye for now