Reviews for Detective Frofrog 2

[Ben-Spurgin]

Hmm

Pluses - Nice art, fun preloader games. Wacky abstract storyline.
Minuses - No humor (at least none that appealed to my particular sort of humor. Perhaps Eskimo Bob fans or stick fans might like it), the beginning was a "look how much work I put in vote me higher" plug that was unnecessary. 8 months? Try 1.5 years for Pimp's Quest and going on 2 years for Pimp's Quest 2 or 8 months for 1:30 Lords of Battle and so forth. <flash tip #4,000: When shading your guys, imagine where the light source would be and draw darkness on the opposite side.> Audio was rather terrible. I know you did it all yourself, but since you're not making any money you are covered under fair use so you don't have to worry about copyright infringement so GET SOME GOOD MUSIC. And I KNOW you'd do wayyyy better if you had some other voice talent. Maybe just do a cameo or something but I'm sure you can find better!
OK i'm done.

McRhyme responds:

Okay, first off:

- I'm sorry Ben. It is not obvious to me that I have hurt your feelings. I remember I reviewed one of your movies and told you it was worth a 6/10. Well, forgive me. I change my mind. I'd say it's worth at least a 8 or a 9. But I was being hard on you. I really wanted you to push yourself. Know what I mean? I really felt that that movie was just the same ol' thing from you. I had NEVER reviewed the movie if I hadn't cared for you. Ok?

I will not comment any of you things you wrote here. I just hope we can be friends instead. We are two great flash animators, you and I. We should stick (bad choice of word) together!

[ZEROEVILDARKCOOL]

The ways of the 7

Listen man, if you want a good movie don't make it fancy with alot of smart and wise jokes (The majority of the population won't understand that). Do something YOU like, and YOU think is funny; not something you think everyone else thinks is funny. You got great animation, great voice actors, great extras, but it's not funny. Damn, I really gotta make that cartoon tutorial site and include a section on how to make things funny...

Your ideas may be orginal, they may be wise...but are they funny?

McRhyme responds:

Good point. But very wrong I'm afraid. The reason I make this series like this is beauce I like it this way. And I don't think there is any other show on newgrounds that... challange you mentally. Science is fun, math is an artform. Eat that! Haha!

[Choppy]

Boring

Sorry, but this wasn't my type of game. This would make people want to fall asleep.

McRhyme responds:

This isn't a game it's a movie. Wait for it to LOAD!

[k0ng]

Months of creation, how many of editing?

This needs to be edited so that it moves at a more interesting pace.
And putting that you worked 8 months on it a billion times in order to avoid criticism is weak.

McRhyme responds:

Three, three months in editing.

It's too bad you like enjoy the pace. I didn't want to move to quickly.

[AleksM]

Not funny.

Good flash and all and I can see u put in a lot of effort and stuff BUT crappy ass story line. This dragged u down.

McRhyme responds:

Not helping. How would I improve the story to fit your taste?