Better with other voice
Bad:
I would like it better without the Chipmunk type sounds and just have a girl voice or something. The song is a little repetitive and repeats itself almost sound for sound after the second break.
Good:
I love that rave sound at 0:55.
It's good that your adding vocals. So many artists don't.
Melodies and such fit perfectly together.
Overall:
Nice work. I would just like to have those voices changed mainly.