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Reviews for "(::Atomic Blue::) GWC"

great!

very good rythm!

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

THanks!

what

Ok so I hear them loops as always- garageband has a terrible loop library, and anyone who has used and experimented with garageband will know pretty much all of the generic loops. You didn't use too much of the audio loops but I sure as hell recognise the midi loops, don't deny that you used a lot of them. You might have edited a lot of them, but the song is still oh so based around those overly recycled loops. They're not even in harmony- it just sounds terribly off, much like a false singer.

Stop with the loops completely already. Try reproducing some of the melodies yourself at least, if not getting on with what you'd normally do when you've been using a music program this long- composing your ideas as melodies in the sequencer. If you have a midi keyboard, use it, and if you don't, I highly suggest you get yourself one.

As for other stuff- it could need a bit higher volume altogether, drag up the master track/volume (it doesn't ever seem to reach the 0db mark), some more reverb all over the synths would do good. Maybe even a little reverb on the master track (do it subtle if you're gonna do that though). Overall this is nothing new, original or interesting at all in any way. Mostly the same loops (though edited in a minimally original way) going as the main instruments and a bit of additional synths etc that don't do much.

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

WTF???? I MADE ALL THESE LOOPS MY SELF SBB. WHY DO YOU ACCUSE ME OF THAT??????

Jeez, you haven't used Garageband in a while have you?

ALSO, I make all the songs by myself, all original, nobody helps me with them.

I would expect better from you man... obviously you are mistaken.

AND, I made most of the instruments and synths my self except for ONE beat! Just because you think your music is perfect in every way, doesn't mean you cn go around accusing other artists of crap.

Now, if you think this song is bad, then I am O.K. with that. I just don't understand why you think that all my stuff is stolen.

goodness

I enjoy your sound. You've got the music in you and once it's in you, it's in to stay and everything you make will reflect it. I need to hear the original of this. I really liked the percussion and chord progression.

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

This is the orig-- OH! You mean (::The Water::) You can see that song by clicking the thingy under RELATED SUBMISSIONS on this page. :)

Thanks for the review!

ZOMG! I WANT UR BABBIEZ!

but seriously, best song yet.

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

LOL!!! I DON'T HAVE ANY BABBIES!!!
(unless by, I want your babbiez, you mean you would like to make some with me, then sure why not. :D )

great!

its got a good flow to it!

great job!

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

They see me rollin' they hatin'... Try to catch me flowing.