My opinion
I think its perfect, you just need to lengthen it, make 16 bar verses and a few choruses (the corus im guessing as the big strings part).
So just lengthen it man. Maybe add a little violin in the background that goes with the melody (piano) but nothing that would drown out the soft feel, or interfere with the strings on chorus.
Good luck.
XT (Down N DIrty)
nah right now the song has kinda a random structure or something, im gonna add more to the backround, and make it more powerful, du push the emotion of the soung a bit more
thanks for the review i appreciate it
add lyrics too
I could sing a couple of verses right off the top of my head. It's a cool rap beat when it comes in at enters at :32 that's when the lyric part comes off. And then make it at least 4 minutes long and then add a bass guitar at 2:00 and it should be much better. Good Start.
Freezy
wow its kinda ROMANTIC .. i like the piano .. its sound freezy cold love .. !!
thats COOL Zajed =D
Amazing
I love this piano. Can I use this? Regardless, great job
inspiring!
I love the paino :D
nice job man!