add lyrics too
I could sing a couple of verses right off the top of my head. It's a cool rap beat when it comes in at enters at :32 that's when the lyric part comes off. And then make it at least 4 minutes long and then add a bass guitar at 2:00 and it should be much better. Good Start.
My opinion
I think its perfect, you just need to lengthen it, make 16 bar verses and a few choruses (the corus im guessing as the big strings part).
So just lengthen it man. Maybe add a little violin in the background that goes with the melody (piano) but nothing that would drown out the soft feel, or interfere with the strings on chorus.
Good luck.
XT (Down N DIrty)
nah right now the song has kinda a random structure or something, im gonna add more to the backround, and make it more powerful, du push the emotion of the soung a bit more
thanks for the review i appreciate it
Took My Breath Away
The overall song is good, there's no doubting that. However, I'd think adding a cello/string bass harmony line underneath the melody would work well.
The atmosphere of the song is, in my opinion, structured more to be a soft hip-hop song, so maybe letting the drums fade in, and fade out at parts, could also work favorably.
I'd almost like to hear the song fade into dead silence for a moment, with the last to leave being the violin, and the first to enter being the drums.
Other than that, you have a fairly good start.
thats a good idea with the silence im gonna add this in the finished version i hope i can make it good
i tried a cello but i just couldnt amek it in a good harmony ot the piano, but il give it a 2nd try
thanks for the review
YES
YES lol i love that piano loop...
but if i were to add nething id probly have one or two more bg instruments... a cool transition to bring in the drums and maybe another one b4 the main strings come in... a bridge whur the piano pattern switches up and gets more complex... and i dunno maybe some breathing sound fx lol (like a long fade in breath or sumthing every now n then if thats what u call it).
i dunno those r just random ideas haha... songs pretty bomb as is.
the pianos too epic lol.
K-Dm
ye i htink im gonna make some huge emotional opening strings, i wanna give the listener a feeling that he can imagine some people playin violin in the backround, no doubt im gonna add more to the piano just for you lol
random but good ideas lol, im gonna amke the piano more powerful and emotional
thanks for the review
Really nice
Really nice everything matchs doesnt sound to looped its awesome
thanks alot dude i appreciate it