ummmm a story might help
Ok seriously your animation is decent that you can work with but get some damn help writing the story so that maybe the next one will be entertaining and not a waste of my time looking at your ability go to waste.
Reviews for "Pumpkin Patch Land"
Kaos444 responds:
Thanks, And That Movie Was Sopposed to have a Story But I Stoped Making it because i didnt think People at newgrounds would find it funny. But I Was Wrong, So I Am Currently Working On A New One With A Story To it.