Great piece!
I'll be honest, I don't know enough about music to give you any constructive advice in any way. All I can tell you is I enjoy your work. This piece in particular really speaks to me. Everything just works so well together, it really creates a great atmosphere. Your work reminds me a lot of some of Ryan Farish's stuff (which is a compliment coming from me, as I love his music). Keep up the great work. You've clearly got a lot of talent, and I think this community will definitely come to see some truly original and breathtaking pieces from you. If it's not too much to ask, I'd appreciate a PM when you release more work. I'll keep an eye our for your name. :)