Aww that's cute...
also, very sexy ;)
Reviews for "First Kiss"
AnglicanEnvoy responds:
Thank you ^^
fantastic.
you got a great talent.
Picture: It is greatly drawn and described, and their blushes also help this picture improve. I liked how you drew the family picture in the background, but the surprise in Mikomi's eyes when she was kissed was also nice and amazing. I think it could have been a bit wider, though.
Story: It's great! The text, grammar, and everything else I didn't mention. The way you described all the little actions Divina did was amazing. I also liked how you included the story title and chapter, and told a bit about your story. I might read it someday. The names were also cute and fits the two lovebirds perfectly.
Ja~ne
lulz
thanx for da boner
AnglicanEnvoy responds:
You're um... welcome, I suppose
good job =)
wow ... nice picture :)
its an awesome style that you got
my first kiss was unexpected like that xD
AnglicanEnvoy responds:
Aww, that must have been nice, I sometimes wondered how a surprise kiss like that would be like
Thank you, I'm glad that you like it ^^