good song but sounds a lot like luigy's mansion
I like the subtleness of it how it just goes from step to step,
the only problem tho is that I think you should have reduced the time between how ever you would say it the parts it would pause for almost 2 seconds in between each part
Some advice
This piece has got nice melody, but you've tried to orchestrate it. I think you've failed. In the beginning everything is fine. But then, when violins enter, I have a feeling that every instrument is playing the same melody. That's not good. Then I'm waiting for something new and.... The same theme again. It's repeated more than 3 times and after this I'm just bored. The best part of this is about - 00:48. Try to think on some development of that motive, 'cause it's really nice. That's my opinion.