Reviews for Ghost Motel 4 Outtakes

[mjnoir1]

Pretty funny

this was pretty funny. you guys should practice reading dialogue with more feeling.. thats my only real gripe.and about that umbrella clue its easily missed... sure the umbrella is right there practically in the open but at the time in the movie the viewer doesnt know they are supposed to be looking for clues so its not seen as important and easily forgotten.anyways good work.You shoulda left the tricky clown scene in cuz its fun to see him get beat up.. then again all the clocks might have blammed you for that which i suspect is the reason you chose to leave it out

[Jenn]

Not bad, but those voices....

you seem like a nice guy...I hate to always always complain about this...but the voices just suck the life out of this series. while it's evident that you put lots of effort in, could you get someone else to do the voices maybe? it would approve things a lot if everyone just sounded a bit more lively. then again, these are ghosts...maybe it's done that way on purpose? The DVD-ish format was nice. The outtakes weren't too funny. The first blowjob one was the only amusing one. There was just a "blah" feeling to it all. The Tricky stuff livened it up a bit, but it seemed sort of random that you stuck him in there, almost kind of like "elling out" and taking something unoriginal just to get a cheap laugh. Try to stick with your own stuff. Again, I like your whole idea about the ghosts in the afterlife, but in the future maybe stick with a more darker tone. That part with the demon eating the dead body was so strange and freaky...stick with that kind of vibe. Overall, decent job...still can't stand the voices but I understand that it's not a cake walk to record them and act them out.

[io3creations]

Excellent "Behind the Scenes" for GM4

Great job guys! Funny, well done "Behind the Scenes" look at the Ghost Motel series. It was interesting to meet the "ghosts behind the actors" :)

A few other things:
1) there was one scene in the commentary where both the commentators and people in the watched movie were talking at the same time. It was a bit distracting.
2) At the end of Outtake 4, Tabitha could've said something like "Hey, Joseph ..." or "Hey, Joseph! I know how we can get free tickets" or something similar because as of now Outtake 4 is kind of open ended.

Anyways, keep up the excellent work and I hope to see GM5 in the near future :)

~Istvan

Violet-AIM responds:

Thanks for the review Istvan. It was kind of tricky getting the film they were watching to match with what the ghosts were talking about since I had it on another movie clip/layer, so I probably didn't notice it that much about the voices being simultaneous, but thanks for bringing that up. And good idea about the "how to get free tickets thing". lol

[gabrielX]

thank you man ,thank you

Man its film ghost motel 4 outtakes is very cool, very made its idea well to make a film counting the experincis passed in the others ghost motel, they I am happy for knowing that you it placed my commentary in its film and this left me very glad, and waits that you does not delay to make its 5 film is waiting for this!

Very obliged for its attention!

GabrielX

Violet-AIM responds:

Your welcome. Your review was one of them that stood out among the rest. :) Anyways, I'm glad you liked the outtakes stuff. I'll probably get to working on episode 5 once I finish another project I have.

[Loosingsoul]

Awsome

All my 5 belong to this awsome flash

Violet-AIM responds:

Cool, my 1st review!! Thanks! :)