Reviews for Electrified Snake

[Little-Rena]

Okay

It has some parts to this which sound very good, the opening and part the way through are pretty nice, but then there are parts in this tune that seem to be a little distorted and doen't really seem to sound too good in my opinion. Although most of it does come together very well and works too, I can't get over the distorted parts.

The ending part to this song is also done in a pretty good way too which is nice, doesn't loop but that's not really a problem. Overall it's pretty decent but it would be better without the distorted parts to it.

3/5

<3

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Assios responds:

Thanks. Glad you liked the opening and ending, and thanks for helping. ;)

[Suspended-3rd-Chord]

untz baby

some great ideas in here, with some somewhat overused blase sounds- but you still did do an great job for making you first full track and I wouldn't expect anything more at this stage.

I like the melodical ideas you start with, and then put those same melodies on a rave lead (I was just making a track yesteday with a similar 3xosc sound). bass is nice and is distinguishable from the kick. I thought 0:30 was too soon for you to break into the interlude section, as this is usual when the intros end! and nothing had really built up for a break section to be needed yet. Some nice big synthstrings and the muffled trance sounds work together well. The track takes a nice lift at 1:10, some full grand harmonization, and decent job with utilizing your themes. Possibly a different, bigger synth could be used to replace the rave lead in the end (or even a nice phaser effect would work well on it) , but its all gravy.

drums could use some mixing. Give the kick a bit more oomph by EQing some more bass. also, it distorts in some places so put some compression on the drums. Also, i would tilt your hats more to the left or the right to make your drums more full- and puts some reverb on your snare. and lastly, try to experiment more with dynamics in your next track. as far as the beat, it could use some more changeups, like you do with the snare in the end, and it wouldnt hurt to change up the kick too, by filling some steps in sporadically.

keep doing what you do!

Assios responds:

Thanks for a good review! :) Glad you liked the melodical ideas, bass etc... I agree with you that I broke into the interlude section too soon. I realized that afterwards ;) Thanks!

[Fro]

Not bad.

This is a lot better then your other snake audios that I have listened to so far. I do think you could add something else to your submissions, but I just can't put my finger down on what it is. They just aren't too new or exciting. I did really like the very beginning to this song, but it seemed to end too soon.

C52

Assios responds:

Thank you!:)

[GronmonSE]

Not bad.

The song's main flaw is the lack of adequate mastering. The tunes are pretty decent, and so is the beat. The kick needs to be stronger as well, but so far, it's a pretty decent job.

Assios responds:

Thanks for your review :)

[Bezman]

Not (yet) a 'keeper' for me.

A fairly simple lead melody but it all works well. The 'break down' seems perfectly timed at the end as did the starting crash.

The switch-up at 1:26 was nicely done.

Some of the levels of instruments sound grating through headphones when there's a lot going on - like some could have been softened a tad.

Also, I'd have personally liked a shorter 'chill' after the shatter sound near the start and also a few more instruments, countermelodies and rhythms going on at times.

A fun song to listen to, but not a keeper for me.

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Assios responds:

Thanks for your review! Glad you thought it was a fun song to listen to ;)