Great idea, needs remastering-working
I like the feeling of this track because it makes you feel anger inside. As if you want to free the beast. There are some great metal influences in there as well. Machine head, Lamb of god and some Slayer for good measure. What I think you could improve on is your song length and structure. This track sounds like it could be turned into an anthem with some work. I also feel that you might want to look at the way you've mixed this track to make it even more powerfull. Hope this helps. Rock on!!!!