Needs improvement badly...
Three words to start off: too much text! That was mostly a reading session, and not very good reading either. You made grammar mistakes and spelling errors, and the text was downright boring. Also, the sprites were badly cropped and you can see the backround around them. Perhaps if you had more animation and less reading this would be better.
Ehh... it was okay................................
No offense, but the only good parts about it were the sprites, and the humor. here is a list of stuff to work on:
- Try to make it a little more original. Maybe make up your own characters, or something.
- The timing of the sound was off A LOT! Fix those mistakes.
- There wasn't much violence. Definitely work on that.
- You had an odd style. Kinda like a tongue-in-cheek, kinda style.
Otherwise, it wasn't that bad. 2/5
You forgot Go-Kart driver and golfer
Nevertheless, this was a pretty good idea. On the other hand, the graphics were grainy, choppy, and just sucked ass. You could have used a much better Mario sprite.
poo
It sucked, but it could have been hilarios if the GFX were clearer and the sound effects.. uhh... worked togather well. some are too loud and some are too quiet.
hmmm
mario was a carpenter at first, you also forgot bowing referee.