Just.................no
First of all, there is a big error in this: Goku goes Super Saiyan, and Sonic says "Old Trick" and goes Super Sonic. WRONG WRONG WRONG!!!!!! If anything, it should be the other way around! DBZ first aired in the 80s, before the Sonic games even EXISTED. AND the original manga came BEFORE that even. Also, your "fight" scene truly and utterly sucked. You also mixed up your Sonic sprites. Your Super Sonic was from Sonic Advance, but your Sonic sprite was from the Genesis games. Probably the ONLY reason this piece of SHIT wasn't blammed was because of the "peanut butter jelly time" thing.