haha
great use of vocals, I love that robotoid sound. Awesome. The instrumentation is pretty cool, but a little repetitive, so the vocals really made the song. If you could somehow incorporate this with serious lyrics and a more varied and extended instrumentation, you'd have a pretty awesome daft punk-ish song on your hands.
Good job.
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Interesting...
Aside from the vocals being difficult to understand, this is a nice tune. Aside from posting them in your comments, what else could you do to make them easier to understand? I don't want a different vocal style, as it's good as it stands at the moment.
A good piece, with some interesting instruments thrown into the mixing pot here. I might consider adding more bass, just to give more emphasis to the vocals.
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there were a couple things i was thinking about to make the vocals clearer, but i didnt really want people to know the lyrics at the time
one thing was to layer a another copy of my singing, eq up in the high end, and down everywhere around 1.5k and 320 Hz, and then add alot of reverb, prettyy much as backgroubnd vocals
the other idea i had was to edit the sytrus instruments so the pitch is a little higher at the beggining of the note, and slides in, cause it adds more human like aspects (in my oppinion)
maybe next time i make a song like this i will make better lyrics and then make them easy to understand
maybe ill make a song about newgrounds...
wow...
you made a great job
I mean... A really good job...
I can't image what did you made to make your voice sound like that...
the rhythm was cool
the effect pretty nice
and... I enjoy it
please continue doing more...
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it was made using fruity loops drums and sytrus instruments
i layered a couple highsynth strings and played really low notes on them for the rythm
added lots of delayn and effects onto drums, made alot of different little drum effects, and kept changing between them
and i ran a couple more instruments through the fl vocoder with me talking., and then mixed the hell out of it
wow, thanks
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The first New Wave song I've heard in a LONG time, so thanks for releasing one. The voice was a bit too hard to understand but it made it sound like a New Wave. Lots of wobbles made this song. The boobs sounded really funny at the end of the song and I was laughing quite alot.
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Needs more bass into to make it more funkier. It could of looped much better, by panning out your laughing.
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wow, totally spaced on panning in this song, thanks man
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well thought out and put together track. the rhythm track works really well with the main themes. I like the poppy melody on the saw synth, backed up the electric sounds, lyrics and vocals work well- i do indeed like the vocoder effect you use, pretty creative from my perspective. Drum beat is nice and original sounding, i like the samples you use. this could use some bassier sounds, the saw kinda works, but I would have turned down the course knob -24 on one oscillator on the clean sounding synth. not sure if it would make the mix sound muddy or more full. its already pretty damn sweet, it would be good if you made this a full song and broke this up into sections- maybe a chorus with some blasting drums with a phil collins esque reverb sound for the vocals!
Keep up the good work.
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hahaha, phil collins esque, i like it
wow, thanks for the positive reveiw
the main reason i didnt make the lead fuller was because i had made it oscilate between really full, and not so full. at some points it obviously made the song not as filling, but at those points the lyrics sounded sharper, and it added more variety to the song.
I look forward to hearing your reveiws from any other songs i send to the rrc