kinda annoying
the idea is good, and so was your song.
but the melody started out with an incredibly annoying synth.
when listening to it with surround and a good bass, will make your ears bleed on a negative 'ringtone' melody thingy. so you could change the main melody.
the bass is cool, and the trysynths are very cool to.
keep going like this.
greetz FlashBlack