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i dont like the beggining at all its not catchy but then gets really good so 10 for the song and -2 for beggining lol
Reviews for "p4c-Eat This [feb-mar mac8]"
p4c responds:
whatever floats ur boat :) ill consider changing it up.
WEEEE
You asked me to check out your song, so I did and initially, I didn't really like it that much. Feeling like a cunt, I decided to download it and throw it on my ipod so I could listen to it some more before dropping a review, and I have to say, this track has really grown on me a bit.
The echo blips towards the beginning give in to a nice reesy sounding synth, the rhythm is classic. Simple, but classic. It all sounds really well produced too. The sounds after 00:54 are really cool/creative. I love them. The rhythm alternates a bit after that, as do the melodies. I don't think that it got too muddy near the end. I noted what it was you were talking about, but it really wasn't a big deal.
This track builds really well. (I don't know why, but that intro reminded me of envy's heaven remix. It's odd because the two tracks have almost nothing in common except maybe a few of the same notes.) In any-case, I'd say change what you feel like you have to.It sounds good now, but it can sound great. Maybe try adding some atmospher at the intro? I don't really know.
Good luck man!
p4c responds:
ill take ur atmosphere suggestion into account, and listen to that since ive never heard of it before. though i'm going to be a little careful about it, though--i like my intro since its really simple and really synthesized-ish, but i do see where ur coming from and how it could be interesting, so ill go ahead and experiment ;D
yeah, the alternating melodies came more as a product of me not being sure what to do next [a kind of artist block... the rest of the time period and work on some other stuff should alleviate that]. its good to see that ppl like my work!!
and in terms of mixing--i think ive really gotten better at that now. i think that even if song concepts are good the song themselves really cant live up to it unless they are mixed well. so i got a bunch of really good suggestions not only from the ng forums but also the mastering suggestions in the FL demo song, and just raw experience. i like i like!
thanx for the rev, good luck to u too, and enjoy reason :D
^^)=b
i like it. it's Trance that isn't THAT repetitive.
Current Score
4.13 / 5.00 (+ 0.082)
p4c responds:
my life is complete :D
Nice
Really cool. Its a cool mix of industrial sounds and higher square sounds. I especially like the beginning, keep it up!
5/5
p4c responds:
actually, its a sine, but that doesnt matter. ill definately make this sweeter, thanx for the rev!
voted 5
Really cool piece.
It's got that industrial feel as well as a house kick to it.
Nice stuff. I like it a lot.
I, myself, was debating whether or not to create an industrial piece, instead I went with techno.
Go check it out, it's called Robots!
Overall good stuff!
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
p4c responds:
will do, mate. yeah i see where the house influence comes in from, i listen to way too much of that stuff haha. and the industrialness... well, this is a tribute to the bots, eh? :D
so im rollin over there now, ty for the rev.