Hm.....
It was an okay remix..
problems 1) Main lead too soft
2)Bass sometimes goes off tune and was overpowering the main tune
3) The kick somehow didnt seem to fit...
4) Repetitive...need to add something else, like your own touch to it.
But....WTF? took you 5 hours?!?!?!?!.. you should have just enlarged the screen and try to see the notes like i did, you also need to experiment sometimes to get the notes right... you MUST remake this!!!! try doing a better version!
-Bahdshah
Check out my version too..xD You might learn some stuff from it!