Well now...... Touching.... To an extent.
I'm going to rate this flash as fair as I can in two different sections:
Section A -
Graphics: Subpar. Just a slide show of sorts. The artwork was also a bit edgy, but it fit the feel of the film well.
Sound: Very, very predictable in terms of trying to exert some sort of an emotion, especially when using Bif Naked's "Lucky". Good, touching choice, but also a simple one.
Interactivity: Nothing to comment on
Style: An ode to anyone you care about is always touching thing, especially to the one it's meant for. However, you also admit to taking ideas from another person, so you get a lesser rating for that reason.
Violence: You had a drawing of yourself pointing a gun to your head. Any way you look at it, guns DO point to violence.
Humor: The humorous thing about this film are some of the more colorful comments made by some of the reviewers.
Overall: Just a slide show and an ode to someone I don't know. I think it's safe to say that you do care for her, but you don't have to express it so openly. Once you let something like this out into the public and let others view it, expect some scorn. Which leads to.....
Section B -
Personally, I'm not the type of person to say mean spirited things, but in this case I have to be blunt. Your g/f isn't that bad. When love hits the hearts of two people, looks should be of the least importance. But, I really don't care to see stuff like this on NG. Also, your bravado in saying a statement to the effect of "Some of these people who say these things wouldn't say it to my face in real life" is like asking for trouble. Of course they wouldn't say it to your face. You know why? Because they're all human beings just like you who hopefully have enough compassion not to hurt a stranger's feelings. On that same note, if I were to be face to face with you, I WOULD say the exact same things I've typed here right to your face. One final thing, don't be so critical of the things being said here. If you let people's words hinder your morale, you're just a weak-minded simpleton.