Nice idea! But...
Hi, hum, well
At a general view, it was cool. The script and everything.
The problem is, the sound effects and music were too low compared to your voice, my ears are still in pain :P
Net time, try to speak with the microphone at the SIDE of your mouth, not in front of it. Like, the "F"'s won't hurt us anymore.
And what happened with the king? I didn't got the end.
Congratulations, despite the little things, it was pretty ok ;)