Could be better.
It was looking good until it started going too quick through different scenes. Oh, and I had heard you Last message thing; I thought it was ridiculous. I think that the stupidest thing you could've done in that situation is give. I'm not suggesting you keep at what you're doing (because there's obviously something wrong). I'm only suggesting that you spend more time on your work. Raise your standards bar as far as what to submit goes. But don't give up. In the time you made all of your movies you probably could've created one huge, amazing one. I had checked out your other work and it was disapointing. I say stick to it though, take all that time and effort and create one awesome one. Make a comeback. Try spending the next 8 months creating one project; if you can keep that up, you'd be at the top. :)