Great!
A smooth and ambient tune. Soft and jazzy, with variation and rythem. Can't think of anything to improve to this, it would fit perfectly as background music, or as a lullaby, heh, keep up the good work!
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Constructive crit?
Ok, first of all the progression is great, although I don't think, even with the different parts based on that progression, that the song has enough variation to last the duration of the song. I'd say that's because you need to have a solid defining lead in there, everything seems to be of equal importance, but what you should be doing is creating a lead around your progression, maybe have it last for twice as long as the progression, and then maybe you could vary the harmony on the second run of the progression. That way, you could develop the lead to flow with the track, and the change in the lead would suffice to maintain interest throughout the song. The faster section was a nice idea, however, I think it would have sounded better if you had swapped the bass at that point with a longer synth bass, because it sounded a bit clumsy with that bass speeding up, whereas it would sound more smooth if you had played it less often. For that, I would think that making the tempo a little less fast would have made this less of an issue. The choir type synth around 2:40 and 3:00 doesn't really sound good, I'd say you're better off going with a less choral sounding synth, you really need some high quality samples if you want to attempt the choir.
But that's all critical thinking, on the whole, it's quite a good ambient piece, just maybe sustain your solo instruments, instead of dropping them out after only a few bars of playing. Mix it up a bit. It's only small things really. Keep up the good work, it's an enjoyable track, and it's great to relax and listen to, and if you're listening to the song from a casual perspective, and not a critical one, then it's worth the listen.
Good job, keep at it!
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Jurian responds:
Thanks for the great Review
Alright
It has a nice opening to it and starts to build into the main song pretty well and everything, I kind of like the soft beat it has, though it doesn't change too much in the whole song through it. In parts it has a soft drum beating which sounds good and everything. There isn't that sticks out in this, but that might be one problem, it takes a little too long to build into something slightly engergetic.
Not that there isn't anything wrong with it being slow most of the way, just the amount of time it takes to reach it. Though the fast bit is kind of weird, I would have just stuck to keeping it slow and eventually it just gets too fast. But otherwise pretty good.
4/5
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Interesting acceleration/deceleration.
At the start, the beat's nice and gentle and the 'windy/airy' notes in the bg work.
Quite a drastic change around 1:47 and then 2:48 for the speed up/slow down. It's quite rare to hear an acceleration like that and it's both refreshing and nerve-wracking simultaneously.
Loops really well too, whilst also providing a nice 'finish' if listened to in iTunes.
This could be really excellent for a game where stuff happened on the beat. You know, like an abstract avoider/collector, or a shooter or something with different mechanics, but set to the rhythm.
Actually, I might do that after Fruity Fish, parhaps starting at the 56s mark to jump into the action. I like the number of instruments and the development of the melody.
Nothing specific to complain about. It's not a tune like most, thanks to the varying tempo, but that's a good thing! All I can' think of that would make me raise the score is maybe even more development and one or two more instruments. But really, when I start rating things 8/10, it's awesome as is and to get a better score, you need to kinda show me things I don't even realise I want, yknow?
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This was a cool vibe
Wow you really have put together something nice here the vibe and flavor is really good this has a nice techno feel but also has a jazzy element to it so in that sense of things good work and it sounds great I would love if you mixed more of that jazzy sound in with this would really bring a new twist to it but regardless this was an amazing sound of work here really love the vibe you bring to this
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Bringing in more jazz feel would be cool
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