Hmm...
Ya know i'm not usually a fan of songs with these types of vocals...BUT i like what you did with it. Made me like the song. Great job
Reviews for "Everytime We Touch [Surge Mix]"
CyrusOfNaias responds:
Rly? Thanks I'm glad you did!
My previous review, updated for the update!
There's a few different things I specifically noticed, and I will start with the weirdest one:
What, exactly, is that weird guitar twitch at 1:30? I'm quite sure that wasn't there before, and it sounds odd... Not sure if that's a technical glitch or intentional.
During the guitar solo there's a bit of an issue with the left-right stereo: it seems to switch back and forth a few times. I'm relatively sure it's not my headphones, as they are rather high quality (and damn well should be for about a hundred dollars! ><), so if this is unintentional, it should probably be checked out.
In the second half of 1:37 you added another high note. It sounds different, but the same quality. I suppose you'll have to ask for other people's opinions on that.
At 1:43 you added a bit of a warbling synth. It sounds good, but try to make sure it doesn't interfere with the voice, it starts to towards the end.
You make the washout at 2:08 a lot more pronounced. Maybe cut that back a tiny bit, but keep it more obvious than in the WIP?
At 2:23 you make a washout where there wasn't any. I'm not sure that one works as well :(
2:35 we get that guitar solo I requested! Now that's got a good feel to it, but the transition could be blended a bit better. Other than the transition it works great :D
Right after the guitar ends we come back to that issue with transition again. It doesn't sound BAD, it just sounds a bit rapid and forced.
Finally, in the ending past the end of the guitar, we find once more that the voice is a bit hidden behind all the music, and I feel that should be changed so that the point of the song isn't shrouded behind your rocking beats (it is, after all, designed around the lyrics, or so I believe :p)
So there you have it, my analysis of what was changed, what I think still needs changing et c. It's still not QUITE perfect for the above listed reasons, but it's quite a bit closer. Hope I helped :D
CyrusOfNaias responds:
O_o Dude that's awesome a clear and thorough review :O
Yes you indeed helped :D
Alrighty crap yea I do have a lot to fix X)
Thanks a bunch~
AWESOME DUUUDE
Man that's pretty deep stuff. Well I love this song to start with and this is a great remix so I had to review. How exactly did you remix it. Like did you find the acapella and instrumental seperate? The guitar is totally unexpected but it works well. Great Job
CyrusOfNaias responds:
:D I found a way around it in FL. There's a special feature which allows you to import mp3 files... it's just kinda unprofessional so I had to do a lot of finalizing before I could work with the original mp3 X)
good
cooda started the lyrics like from the first verse and u shooda taken advantage of the synth more 4/5
CyrusOfNaias responds:
XD Yea... zomg I knew I had some more to do
thanks~