Not bad
The intro was good, and the graphics were better than usual in Clock films. But please, can you abandon the voices, please?
Reviews for "Incarnation part 1"
MonkeyClock responds:
I think it's a tradition, or an old charter or something..
Well
That wasn't so bad, considering my disdain for clocks, that was pretty good. The storyline here is pretty good, clocks (as much as I hate them, original characters...) were pretty funny in this (I loved how Strawberry said "Wee!")
Let's see the sequel, I look forward to it intently; which makes me feel wrong because I don't like clocks... Way to go..
~ NW.oYm-NO ~
MonkeyClock responds:
Hopefully you will like clocks in their incarnations better =)
Fast Paced
When I watched the intro scene a couple of things caught my attention. Your strange style of graphics made the perspective of the movie skewed and most graphics such as the file cabinet and the desks just looked well out of place because of the angle you drew them at.
I thought that this did allow your loop animations, like that of the bouncing movements whent the clocks spoke, to be much smoother but weren't boring or repetitive to watch.
The intro music was annoying on so many levels. Although I'm not familiar with the song you used, it was out of key, time and was of extremely awful quality and unbearable to listen to.
The rest of the music didn't get much better, but you used a TTS program which had a lot of fluxuation in the pitch of the voices which was enjoyable to listen to and kept the movie running at a fast pace with no irritating stops between different people's speech.
The dialogue and storyline were well thought out in my opinion and kept the story interesting. The "artist's renditions" with your intentional misspelling and crayon style drawings were an original idea. The dialogue and graphical humour cooperated with each other well throughout the movie but it ended pretty boringly, even though it was supposed to be a cliffhanger of sorts.
I really want to see what happens in the next episodes.
MonkeyClock responds:
You're the first person who didn't like the music =O
LOL a1locc couldnt get it up
It was like a blend of lord of the rings and matrix. I'm not a big clock fan but this is the best one I've seen so far.
why clocks?
no voice acting, characters are clocks ffs! what else do i need to say.
and that computerised voice is so annoying.
MonkeyClock responds:
You could explain what ffs means =O