Awesome
This song was really cool, I really got into it. Can't believe it's your first.
Try mixing up the guitar a little bit, just adding some effects into the mix. For most of the the songs I like I feel the melody (guitar) should always be changing or it sounds kinda repetitive. This song had that repetitive feel but I really think just little effects (like distortion as F-777 suggested) can make the song that much better.
Great job!
Incredible, but..
The beginning was really impressive, but then it's more less the same beat we're listening to throughout the whole song. There should be some development to back it up to a great song :)
Nice...
It's pretty good but it needs more bass. Plus as already said it isn't really techno as much as it is instrumental rock.
Really good song
The mix is good but i have to agree with RobinDB, the drums were a little bit lacking but still its a great song.
Too much guitars in
You should have put this into rock or into D&B, but not in Techno!
I hate guitars! Sorry dude!