nice job on the characters....
those were some nicely drawn graphics...however the animations were a bit choppy and there were some parts that went on too long...like the guy walkin with the torch and the explosion just before it...cuz those parts a bit shorter...also ya need some more background sound...it cut out near the end and the movie was soundless for like maybe 15-30 seconds or so...i forgot...anyway...good job, just needs a bit of touch-up...
Incredible Animation... Needs Plot Improvement
Ok, let me start by saying how incredible the animation was. I can't find anything to complain about artistically. Well... the explosions and fire lacked depth.
However, the plot or message moved entirely too slow and was too vague. You gave some message about the story, but I mean, we see all these characters, locations, etc. and I have no idea what is going on. For instance, the scene where the guy burns up and breaks apart, why the heck is that happening? And other things like I really didn't know who the characters were or why they were fighting, other than one was "greatly evil". I know this is based on a comic so byu reading the comic we'd probably understand. But keep in mind WE haven't so, next to the absolutely fantastic animation, I have no reason to watch this Flash. It needs to move ALOT quicker, have a more developed plot, and - of course - FIX YOUR MUSIC PROBLEM, It quit like a minute early for me.
-=Jon=-
A WHOLE MINUTE???? I'm so sorry man, The flash seems to go much faster for some reaon on the internet, for me on my actual computer everything went fine most of the times, never a minute out of synch, I'll definetaly get onto that problem for my next animations. Sorry for any inconvinience
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hmm...well i like the idea...but ..it just looked like still images that were slightly animated....i think this would be so great if you made it more animated...just a suggestion and all...
Nice one!!!
Mikento's good. The music really gives this movie its flavor, though. and the music stopped somewhere in the middle. or maybe it's just my com[uter which is why i excluded that factor in my rating. this is a great trailer. Keep it up Mikento. I'll read your comic book when you come out with it...
cool
if you are trying to make an anime,cool.
still...the enemy its like a fusion of blanka from SF and ganondorf.