My prospective...
Alright-listen up. First off, don't mistake me as one of those jerks who bad-mouths peoples work when they cant do anything themselves. IM not one of them. Here's what i thought:
1) You definatley need drawing and animation skills. Keep practicing. If you can get good and use that humor, you can go far. In all honesty, this could've been drawn in Microsoft Paint.
2) You took the music and button from the Flash MX tutorial. You know what I'm talking about. You know what you did. That's right. Bad. Bad boy.
3) On a humor level, I give it a 8. On all the other factors, a 3. Keep on going. Come up with a story, and keep practicing on flash.
Although i know you could've done better, I'll will give you a 5 for you humor and efforts. PROTECTED. you got off easy...