Has potential.
I'm sorry that the first review you get on this is a bad one, but what good is a review if it isn't honest? There is no perspective, the clock looks like it's on the wall but it seems closer to the viewer than the bed. The horizon line is curled, it seems like no effort at all was spent on it. The clock also has 10 dots instead of 12. Every line is curly in fact, my theory is that you drew this with a mouse, not a tablet. Either way, I'd advise drawing the lines with the Line Tool instead of the brush.
The colors overflow their fills, especially if you take a look at the bed. There's some brown on the ground below a foot of the bed, some white underneath the bed sheets, pink under the man's slippers, so many more... The floor also looks awkward, really bizarre, with various mismatching colors mixed into it.
There is no measuring, none at all. I hope you aren't planning to use "this is just a cartoon, who cares?" (as cartoons don't usually have perspective or measuring) as an excuse, this is sloppy even for a cartoon.
As for the focal point, the man I mean... The drawing has plenty of potential, I take it you understandably spent most of the effort there. Except for the overflowing of the colors and the fact that he doesn't have ears, he's actually drawn pretty good.
You might also consider doing some shading. One of the most important things I learned about Flash (you did this in Flash, right?) is that shading makes objects look much, much better.
I assume this is some of your beginner works, and it's not that bad. My advice? Spend the effort you spent on the man on the rest of the picture. Just spend more time on it.
Out of 10 points, I'm giving you a 5, because it has plenty of potential and you seem to be a beginner.
Never give up. I'm looking forward to seeing you ameliorating.
~Review Request Club