It was ok, except...
It was fairly simple, which isn't bad. But the one thing that really threw it off was the brass in the background. Brass is a tricky thing to work with, and is easily overused, or, in this case, is off note-wise (tuning, pitch, etc.). I liked the simple piano and percussion, though. They worked well together. But, again, the brass sticks out like a sore thumb and ruins the overall motion of the song.
Ah, okay.
I admit this isn't one of my best and I kinda rushed it.
its peaking
dud e you should of mixed it down a lil cause yo its peaking way to much i think it needs work and finetuning
Really, I liked it. Your comments have been noted.
ok.
your piano is over modulated you may want to compress that some. The Drums are a lil to basic id on't know its not a bad remake but i've heard better. Other then that yes somethings off. Keep working on it though i'm sure you'll master this!
Wyldfyre1
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