Hmm..
I've seen worse. I'm sorry to have to start out my review with those words, but they hold true to what I have to say. All I can suggest to you is to be able to develop plot(lol...plot on NG...lol), work on backgrounds a little, and PLEASE work with those voices! Not to sound rude or anything, but it would be doing us all a favor.
The voices will be better next time, and yes, the next one will have a better plot. Thanks for giving an honest review
Oh the voices.
It's really hard to understand what the girl is saying. Other than that, good movie.
I know her voice sucks. I couldnt find a girl who would do her voice. She will have a better voice next time.
Alright
Not too bad, but the voices were garbled and a little hard to understand. The girl sounded too much like Foamy from the Neurotically Yours series, except that Foamy is easier to understand. Keep working on it though, this is better than a lot of other first time flashes I've seen.
The girl will definetly have a different voice next time.
aaaaah the voices!!
Well this might have been better had the voices been different... honestly I got tired of trying to figure out what they said so I stopped watching it. But hey this is still better than a lot of junk on newgrounds! lol
The voices will be different in part 2
it was all right
but why do master chief's panty thingy's keep bobbing up and down?
It was my brother's idea. Glad you thought it was ok. Thanks