Reviews for Badly Drawn Stickman

[ashtanel]

Good Job

Realy good.
Some of the motion is realy nice. The part where he fell down looked great, the curve of his back and the position of his legs where realy good.
The part where he walked was nice.
Walking is, as you know, one of the hardest things to have look right.
You little guy walked nicely, he had sort of a "cowboy" look to his walk.

The bit where he rubbed his head was nice and moved well.

One note: He should have had a face from the frist frame.

Keep it up, you have talent... I can tell.

Try to flesh them out a bit more on your next few projects.

Cheers!

Bezman responds:

Thank you very much for all the praise, the excellent review and the encouragement. :)

The reason he doesn't have a face at the start is because the animation is supposed to be about stick-men progressing. The first one wasn't connected so it fell apart, the 2nd one didn't have good enough legs, then the 3rd guy bumped into the tree as he didn't have eyes to start off with.

I think a lot of folk didn't realise that though, so maybe I should make it more obvious when I finish it...

I'll definitely do something a bit more fleshed out than just sticks later on.

Stay funky!

[awsomeboyz6789]

its not bad

its actually a good stickman

[tommylm]

Looks really good

You should finish it before submitting it, and it would get a nice score.

Bezman responds:

Thanks for the nice review and the encouragement. :)

I was really discouraged by the low score... hopefully you're right. The thing I'm worried about is that it doesn't have a story as such so completing it might not improve the score that much.

It's just a thing supposed to be about someone improving their drawing of stickmen.

Well, I'll finish it in a few weeks' time and hopefully you'll be right about it being better recieved. :)

Stay funky,
Bez

[BIG]

<<<Awesome FBF>>>

I thought i made up the frase FBF but i guess not.see ou havent gotten a review in about a year now. FBF's are always hard. I raised your score to 1.57 for yeh. I hope youve made more by now!

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CMT

Bezman responds:

I made the 'asteroids' music video and I'm now working on the full version of that.

You can see the sampler now on NG, and that's better that this imo. The full version will be even better, hopefully.

I think the phrase 'fbf' has been around since the dawn of animation pretty much...

[YoinK]

hmm quite silent

The sticks were animated pretty well. Some music would be a nice add on. It feels kind of silent but maybe it needed to be silent. So the stick dude tried to grab an apple and he ended up hitting his face. Nice work of animating that and animating his facial expression when his head colided with an apple or whatever fruit it was.

Bezman responds:

Surprised that (and happy if indeed) you liked it.

It was originally meant to go with a particular tune from Underworld's last album. I couldn't work out how to rip the CD though.

Stay funky!