Cool
Excellent parody, lyrically funny and wrong. But that's just fine. It's recorded well and so's the guitar which was spot on to the original. Liked the ending too, random deep voice, anyway. great job. Maybe you could do some more songs along this vein. Great job
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Not really to my taste. :-/
Essentially, I found this song pleasant enough to listen to, but it just didn't make me laugh.
The guitar part's fairly well played, but it sounds like you could have let some notes ring for a little more. It's a tiny bit stilted.
Did you use some sort of echo effect for your chorus?
I think I've only heard one version of the original and that was a while ago. Your voice seems kinda similar to the slightly whiny, kinda 'raw' voice I remember.
It was mixed well, there weren't any glitches I heard, the volumes seemed perfect...
The lyrics were reasonably well written, though it is a 1-joke show. It made me smile a little the first time I heard it, but essentially it just doesn't tickle my funny bone.
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Hey There YoinK
This was pretty good and quite funny lol, ive heard a few parodys of this song, and this is probably the second best one ive heard, the best was "Hey There Khalila", lets start with this though. This is definately more suitable for Newgrounds than the original version lol.
The lyrics need a bit of work, the syllables dont match with that of the original song so at alot of parts it doesnt quite fit. Also the lyrics could of been a little better, if you had thought some of them through a bit longer you may of been able to come up with better lyrics, rather than going with "Who drank the rum?" and "I'm rasing my right eyebrow" they dont really make sense lol.
The guitar work is good, its a fairly simple tune and i learned it myself on guitar, sounds pretty clean throughout the song though. So well done on that. Your singing isnt bad, a little flat at some parts but other than that its not bad. I have trouble singing and playing guitar at the same time lol. The chorus was probably the best sung part in the song. the ending was kinda werid though, sounded like a mix of a Transformer and Darth Vader lol.
Overall it was a pretty cool song, nice parody but maybe you need to work out the kinks a bit. Id advise you to maybe do some more parody songs as this one was pretty good. Hope to see more from you man. Peace out!
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Intresting Idea
The idea of this is alright though I think it could do with some work on the lyrics, the last line didn't really work to well in my view and some of them really didn't go too well with the tune, try to use less words at times and ones that have less syllables, it would work a lot better in my opinion. Though the chorus did work but that's stright from the song isn't it? lol.
The tune is good and sounds like it, so yeah, like I said the idea is good just working out the lyrics needs work. Your singing is fine but at parts it seemed like you got lost with what to say and stumbled a little. Maybe try this again with diffrent words or try a diffrent song, lol.
3/5
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Hey there delilah!
Well i must say this is a funny song,i just laughed for minutes and minutes...
But i DO NOT wana know why you wrighted this song...
The guitar playing is pretty shwell,also the singing isn't realy good,you didn't realy tried singing bautifully no? (Exept the Oh it's what you did to me part)
P.S. The ending,deep voice part was pretty scary! 0_0
Score : 10
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