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Reviews for "Ucogi Beach"

its perfect

i mean im just your average 14 year old boy but that is great art work did i mention im one of your biggest fans but from my point of view im a boob guy i agree umm partially with Assmongerer but i would like if the boobs were showing please for me do you think you do that please thanks man and again you rule

Veinom responds:

thanks :)
u mean her top should be off, in this image?

NICE..........GREAT

Veinom stop giving people boner an less you want give people boner which make you FAG ?!

Nice :) work man really love your work

And for the guy down of me who wrote assay about this picture, screw you say you love it or not, don't give us your smart smoggy view of it

Assmongerer.

Well, man, you're certainly able to draw perfect asses. I mean, the ass of this drawing is perfectly ass-tacular, what with the ass and the skirt and the ass. Did I mention how great that ass is?

However there are a great many things wrong with this picture. Not that ass. Damn, I'd hit that. No. Great many wrong things with this picture. The hair is completely bland, sporting a wholesome three sparse layers of shading that are completely at odds with the rest of the picture - even if the hair was "directing" the flow of shading for the picture, the body (ass included) and clothes don't show it, sporting lighting from another two sources as well as completely ignoring the presence of the hair. My advice would be to choose one direction for the lighting, stick with that, and try and put more detail into it, while shaping the light flow around that spank-magnet.

Next issues would be the skirt. It's length is at odds with itself, longer at the sides while shorter over the big booty itself. Now, while I definitely appreciate what you're trying to do, there is no real existing fashion that employs those tactics and any attempt at foreshortening doesn't really cover how much shorter the ass-flap is. I'm not telling you to lengthen that one part of the skirt to make it fit in with the others, no. I'm telling you to shorten the rest of it, just to show off more of those gracious hips, hey?

Now, i really should move onto the way-too big forehead and unrealistic tiara and boring gradient-based background and poorly proportioned breasts, but all I really want to concentrate on is the ass so let's head back to that, shall we? The hips are out of proportion to the torso and shoulders - while the characters (whose name and face and whatever else beside the ass is not important) is turned, it's obvious that the shoulders and torso are too small for those hips, try lengthening them out a tad, or just shading them more accurately to make them seem lengthened out more.

So, overall, nice ass, ass and ass. Can't say much for the rest of the picture. Should really rate this lower but you get an 8 for perfect ass-drawing.

Sexually depraved? What are you talking about?

Veinom responds:

hey, thanks... the forehead was bugging me too lol!
Maybe I will leave this one as it is and try to be more careful next time. And yes, the shadows are a bit random, but I never thought somone would notice anything beyond that ass! I'd like to think that the sun is above her, not that it has 2 light sources. oh, and the skirt is not shorter, its in perspective, as it moves by the blowing of the wind so are the hair.

Dat ass...

Need I say more? Really good drawing!

Great...... but

Just make one of her naked already lol. On a side note, it kinda looks like the shadows and lighting conflict with one another, other than that I can't really complain. Good work