excellent
very good
excellent
very good
haha thanks
Great!
That was really cool. Nice work. Keep it up!
Pretty Good
Pretty good story. Can't wait to see the next part.
thanks
ke ke ke
good job strawberry.
ATTENTION!
Not bad
In fact, I like it. However, I'd smooth out the text screens a bit... they looked a bit clunky. Other than that, great job.