he broke the guitar
but it was still very funny and also very informative.that was a great peice of advice that could be used by every one.the laugh was awsome.and dude that disclamour rocked.good job dude
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he broke the guitar
but it was still very funny and also very informative.that was a great peice of advice that could be used by every one.the laugh was awsome.and dude that disclamour rocked.good job dude
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At least someone gave me 9 ! Thanx for mark and nice review ! :)
Good
It's nice to see that you can have a decent flash without violence, swearing, and nudity. The movie seemed...slow (tortoise-pace I suppose?) You might need to make it busier with more jokes and things. It was well animated, but when things fell, they dropped too slowly. I thought it was pretty good all things considered.
Also, what's with the different colored eyes?
Yea, I know things dropped to slow. But let just say: "It's just because the cartoon was about a turtle :)" And about different colored eyes - just open my profile ;) Thanx for review
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Flash cartoon without blood for 14 yr teenager isn't a flash cartoon at all ! Isn't it ?
Hm..
Pretty cool. Graphics were alright. Pretty faair movie. Nice work. Keep it up!
Thanks !
A fair reveiw just for you.
Listen, you've obviously got quite a bit of skill with the ol' paint tool, but you gotta work on a few things first before you can be a truly great animator. First, if you're not gonna use nudity, violence, or swearing, you're gonna have to 'funny up' a bit. It takes a LOT of effort and planning to make something funny and entertaining the hard way. I did chuckle a couple of times, so overall it was an okay animation. It just needs a bit of improvement.
Yes, that's a really fair and constructive review. Thanks for tips. I'll try for my new cartoon will be more "cartoony" :)