nice try
Voice overs were really bad but the idea was ok. Try to have more fighting next time. Good for a first try and hope to see better from you.
nice try
Voice overs were really bad but the idea was ok. Try to have more fighting next time. Good for a first try and hope to see better from you.
keep working on it
next time have more fighting and ad depth to the "fill" charecters. and work on the voice overs too
Wel, I aint gonna flame ya
But it moved too slow, and the animation took way too long to finish a single move. I would make it move faster and It'll be nice.
Okay...
But some of the animations were way too slow. The sound cutting could be smoother. And frankly, you can spent a little more time making the artwork really shine. Keep practicing.
Yeah
It was ok for i guess this being your first one. I cant hold any critiquing cause i haven't made one. But the sounds on your movie were from like Conkers bad fur day. Anyways,i agree with the last guy, people in war dont sound stoned.