Nice Start, but needs work
its pretty nice for a first submission, but might I recommend that adding voices to it might strengthen the piece. But other than that, nice.
Reviews for "XIN Session 01"
Room for improvement.
It was really really good, but you left room for improvement. It would be better with voices added in and the art could be touched up, but besides that, it was good.
that was actually really good
I enjoyed it, the lack of speaking actually made it bette rthan if they really were talking. I wanna see the 2nd one.