Lookin good! :D
This song seems professional to me, the transactions from when the lead voice changed pitches were all perfect, and the way how the music plays loud, it sends a powerful vibe through me, but i suggest lowering the music just a tad so we can hear you just a bit better.
But thats just my 2 cents, im not completely sure if that would sound better, afterall you made a good peice already :D
~Music, Word.