Lots of loops, too many
I think over time, people's music is able to go into a vast assortmant of ways. With synthesizers and recording programs, there are an infimous array of sounds to chose from. So picking only a few and making repeated loops of them isn't taking control of it. Try taking time on your music, that's what I learned, I submitted my first piece and it got owned by voters, simply because it was not well done.
I didn't vote on your submission because I would be making my submissions in this area seem better. Just try, I am not trying to be mean, just trying to give some criticizm.